How is my song "Demented" (to Eminem's "Demon Inside" beat) LISTEN LINK INSIDE plz be honest?

okay, well your voice kinda sounds weird and you should work on pronouncing your words better. also you sound kinda bad when you start a new thought. for example "I dont condome the use of drugs or alcohol" sounds pretty weird. you shouldnt talk about that anyway. i thought you were supposed to be demented man.